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awesome title. by StoryTeller13 awesome title. by StoryTeller13
Yeah... upgrade of this one: [link]
Tried to change as little as possible. That's why it might come off as slightly cliché.
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Lillibeth13 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
well that's a MAJOR upgrade lol, this piece is well done and really shows how you've grown and improved these last few yrs. i feel like this should be an ad for a television series :p i like this. you captured different personalities in each of the girls. niceee
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thanks, that's exactly what I wanted to express in this drawing. :P
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Cyrkael Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I remember you speaking about this drawing during a livestream ^_^ This came out really great ! The characters look so nice =)
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ShellyAllMighty Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
wow, this looks so good in small view, you should take a look 0_0
The way their heads tilt and each one has a different expression breaks the cliche, the composition really is good :3
Their different looks are all intresting~

and the logo is cute too XD

Can you tell me what this story is about?
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll post the summaries of the first two books of the series, since I finished those two already.


Emily has always been different. Meeting Myran though, a mysterious yet very attractive friend of her brother’s, makes her realize she is not normal at all. For Myran she leaves her friends and family to discover who she really is. She meets the Eight, a group of impressive teenagers who need her in order to save their home planet. This seems like a tempting idea until trouble shows up: Myran is not the kind guy he has always pretended to be, every last person of the Eight turns out to have their own problems and on top of that someone doesn’t seem to want the Eight to succeed in putting their world-saving ritual into practise… While Emily tries to get rid of all of these problems, she finds out saving the planet is not that easy at all.

Jonine has no idea who she really is, yet her naivety seems everlasting. Her life takes a turn when Nicolas, a charming man who threatens Jonine’s mother Emily, appears. Both Jonine and Emily take shelter in the High King’s castle, where Jonine meets Tach. When Tach leaves the castle and Jonine goes after him, Emily’s angry side shows up. Jonine is sent to Earth, where she grows to be a brave young woman. In the meantime Nicolas takes advantage of Jonine’s absence. He kidnaps Emily and builds an army against the King. When Jonine returns, everything seems lost. Jonine decides to rescue her mother. On her travel, she meets Tach again, who tells her they belong to the Eight. They still need to collect the remaining six though, strangers who are scattered over the planet. While trying to find the other six, Jonine learns about her mother, Tach and most of all about herself.


... long summaries are long
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ShellyAllMighty Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
that sounds dead cool... Too bad I cant read it >>>>>>"
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too bad eh... xD
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh by the way, Emily is the lowest left girl, Jonine is the lowest left girl in the circle in the middle.

Also, weird enough: the second summary is of the first part, the first summary is of the part. I kind of played with the chronologic order while writing.
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CraigWinslow Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
shnifty :D
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks konnie. :) :glomp:
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CraigWinslow Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
lool
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Maij-Lee Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
yeah, your title is AWESUM!!!
i waited and waited until you finished..
and know it's soooo nice :D
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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Blank-Muse Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Digital Artist
This is gorgeous! I love the elemental representations. Your flowers are so pretty. I'm jealous. :D
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks haha. y u jealous, you're awesome for commenting teehee.
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Blank-Muse Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Digital Artist
The character structures are very well designed. You pull off realism/semi-realism much better than I do. :)
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, they are OCs from a story I'm working on so you could say I know em pretty well. :P
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Blank-Muse Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Digital Artist
Awesome. :) What kind of story is it?
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a fanatasy story actually, I guess you figured. The outer girls are from the first generation, while the inner ones are from the second.
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Blank-Muse Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Digital Artist
Cool. Are you going to do multiple books on it?
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
5 actually, I finished 2 already.
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SweetDuke Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
Wow the improvement from the original picture to this one is like night and day! Beautiful piece this is, I love all their facial expressions, and the way you colored their skin and hair is so pretty. ;u; And the backgrounds suit them nicely as well. Wonderful job! C:
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StoryTeller13 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ♥
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